arts et poesie

I feel like

If love doesn’t bring me things I want
If everything in this life is not as I dreamt of
Then what am I supposed to believe
If something is hidden behind the truth
If it’s preventing me from all I wanna do
Nobody can show me what really love is

And when I see into the reality

<<Chorus>>

I feel like
Your body is so far from me
Your heart that walked away from mine
I feel like the sun won’t shine
I feel like
My life is just an illusion
Your smiling face fades away forever
I feel like everything is over

As I’ve found no sense in this world
I try to call you with each sweet word
But baby I’m getting lost into the unknown
Please open up your heart again to save me
To keep me safe from the hell around me
And then I’ll show you the best of my love

And when it’s impossible to carry on
<<Chorus>>

Everything you smell
Everything you feel
Are supposed to be our private sharing
I don’t know where you go like that
But it’s the way we’re apart

And when I see into the reality
And when it’s impossible to carry on
I feel like there’s nothin’ to hold

<<Chorus>>

ben vrmt chapeau , comment t'arrive à t'exprimer aussi profondément en anglais :?
Bien que je l'apprécie et pratique bien comme langue , je crois pas qu'un jour je la préfèrerais au français pour exprimer ce genre de sentiments (poèmes) .... déja je trouve que le français est + romantique et + expressif et profond comme langue :heart:
alors que anglais , c plus mélodique à mon gout :?

djo a écrit:: ben vrmt chapeau , comment t'arrive à t'exprimer aussi profondément en anglais :?
Bien que je l'apprécie et pratique bien comme langue , je crois pas qu'un jour je la préfèrerais au français pour exprimer ce genre de sentiments (poèmes) .... déja je trouve que le français est + romantique et + expressif et profond comme langue :heart:
alors que anglais , c plus mélodique à mon gout :?

merci bien...
ben moi je pense le contrair 2 ce ke ta dit.... mai bon rien nai evident ds tt ca, toutes les langues sont parfaites pr s exprimer, parck kom g dit avant il suffit de s inspirer pr trouver les mots ki viennent du coeur... et c ce ke je fai, mai j avou ke g pas vrmt 1 langage poetik pr s exprimer en francais, car je lis pas bcp de paroles franC, et lire des paroles et les bien comprendre contribuent efficacement a avoir un bagag poetik ac 1 tel nivo....

Shadows of love

Time
Is all I need to cross this
Line
The way I keep my feelings
Inside
You never know how it feels

Pain
Is taking a place into
Flames
To see the crying eyes in my
Face
It looks like a river of tears

Give me more air so I can breathe

<<Chorus>>

I will bring you the joy you want
Excuse me for these things I forgot
I’m still admiring the best of you
Still loving all what you do
Am I the one you’re thinking of
The way I’ll always be apart from
The shadows of love

Touch
Is what makes me warm too
Much
It’s what we shared together
In past
But baby you threw it all away

So why
You went astray and let my soul
Die
Should I believe I was living in a
Lie
The day we were on the same way

But somehow I’m gonna tell you today

<<Chorus>>

Whatever it could happen
I can’t get over you
Forever safe in my heart
That’s what I promise you
Take aside the sorrow
Take aside the shadows… of love

well this is the last one i ve written:

Love takes two

Even though it’s time to say goodbye
I look around to know the reason why
Kiss my lips and make it easy for real
Cause you’re the only one I ever need

One thing inside of me is a necessity
To take me in your heart eternally
I fear this bad end of our love story
The joy in my life that was a reality

<<Chorus>>

It was a special night
When you touched me tenderly
The day you were mine
Was enough to change my destiny
How I need to cherish you
Just to feel me next to you
As love takes two

Loneliness has taken a big part of my mind
Sadness will be on the top deep inside
Can’t imagine a life without a love to hold
I’m praying for a miracle from God above

If only this pain could be thrown away
We would make together a brighter day
It’s in my heart where you should stay
This is how you can lighten up the way

<<Chorus>>

I’m missing you more than ever
I swear you’ll be my angel forever
I wish I could be back to you
Cause I believe love takes two

<<Chorus>>

A la mémoire de ma tante
Paix à son ame

Fériel, tu te nommais
Par un visage angélique tout l' monde te reconnaissait
Avec gentillesse, délicatesse et sensibilité
C'est ainsi que tu te comportais

Un 27 Novembre tu t'es éteinte
A cause une mystérieuse maladie qui t'as atteinte
Au petit matin, c'était la fin,
Au petit matin, leurs efforts étaient vains,
Ces six médecins autour de toi
Et qui ne savaient guère ce que tu as

Quatre jours ont suffis
Seulement quatre jours, pour te voler la vie
Cette vie, ou tu ne t'es point epanouie
Du moins, comme tu l'avais toujours ressenti.

Une si bonne mère tu étais
Aux deux magnifiques garçons que tu as quittés
Dans la douleur, la peur et l'insécurité
Tu les as laissés,
Mais n'aie crainte
Ils sont déjà si grands, beaux et intélligents
Comme tu l'as toujours espéré.

Quant à moi, un grand vide tu m'as laissée
Toi ma chère tante préférée
Malgré les quatres années, sans toi passées,
ton souvenir est resté, à jamais,
dans ma mémoire gravé.

(c mon premier poème. k'en pensez-vous?)

WAW ! bravo 10/10

c'est tré émouvant vraiment Crying or Very sad

rien a dire syrine, vrmt chapo pr 1 debut... continue, et 1 conseil: n arrete jamai

no comment vraiment bravo sirine c tres tres touchant felicitation applause

continu sur cette voie c genial se que tu ecrit

merci bcp, ca me flatte vrmt. d ke jekriré du nveau je vou le transmettrez. biz tt lmonde.

Habitué(e) Nombre de messages : 71 Age : 35 Date d'inscription : 15/11/2004

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Have you ever felt alone?
When all your dreams were gone
Have you ever felt so numb?
When every thing was scoured up

Time take every thing away
But I will survive, I'll stay
Time take every thing away
And I'll be so strong, yeah!

In my life I have met
A lot of great friends
That's exactly what you need
To be happy and so sweet!

Just wake up don't fall a sleep
Meaning's life is it too deep?
Time take everything away
But I will survive, I'll stay

bravo

c'est plein de puissance !
le genre à adapter pr une chanson rock ou metal thumright

c super halloula, g bien aime les mots et le theme
bon voici la derniere ke g ecrite:

Let’s try another way

This is when we belong together
The moment we made promises to make it last forever
I wonder why you closed the door
And make my life so obscure breaking out the war
Emptiness in my heart hurts too much
I ignore what bad we’ve done
Let me show you now
The pain’s all over me
And let’s work it out
For you and me

<<Chorus>>

Wanna take the last breath from you
Wanna get it all back
Let’s try another way
To satisfy me enough
Wanna make this dream come true
Wanna make it alive
Let’s try another way
To kiss away the sorrow inside
Let’s try another way

It’s like I’ve lost the sense of living
Maybe I’ve been in illusion and I’ve been dreaming
Now my smiling face has disappeared
With the loss of every lovely thing in my life I need
Whatever it takes I’ll never give up
I’ll get back the love to us
Kept the ache in silence
No one is hearing me
Afraid of the difference
Between you and me

<<Chorus>>

Is there anywhere to go
Any way to reach your heart
Baby all that I still know
That it’s hard to be apart

<<chorus>>

personne necris a part qq1s? ou vs garder vos mots parmi vos vies privees? Smile

... sharing is sometimes important u know Smile

vos essais sont tjs la bienvenue... c pas ci movai d essayer vs savez Smile

hi again... bon je vs presente ma poeme la plus recente, je vien just de l'ecrire Smile

j espere kell vous plaira...

Thanks to your love

Sometimes it feels like
The joy has come back again
When I read through the lines
I understand you come to stop the rain

And you appear in my life suddenly
With a touch you’ve changed my destiny
You give me the hope I long to get
You’re my everything around my head

Could it be a sign of our fate
When you’re the girl I wanna spend my life with
The only one I wanna kiss
Each time you call my name
It’s that way that makes me have much happiness
And so much more tenderness
Thanks to your love

You make me have the opened eyes
For a world filled with high emotions
How it’s so romantic every night
To find in you the intensive affection

Baby I can’t look around anymore
You’re not like any other girl I met before
I can’t wait ‘til tomorrow comes
That day when I’ll take you in my arms

Could it be that I found an angel
Who walks into my life to be a part of me
To run my soul for an eternity
If I wanna look for the reason
I’m just driven by the desire to love all what you do
And if my heart has turned to you
That’s thanks to your love

Feeling you
I do it all the time
Dreaming of you
It’s my power at night
Holding you tight
It’s the way I embrace you all my life

Could it be a sign of our fate
Could it be that I found an angel
I’m just driven by the desire to love all what you do
And if my heart has turned to you
That’s thanks to your love

Could it be that I found an angel
Could it be a sign of our fate
It’s that way that makes me have much happiness
And so much more tenderness
Thanks to your love

You just complete the puzzle of my heart
You raise me up so I can see
That we shouldn’t get over what we began
Baby please keep loving me

Ahmed

Some people are crying
Calling for a hand
With broken feelings
Waiting for someone else

Some people feel lonely
Cause of lack of affection
They need somebody
To give protection

We are here, we are there
Interact keeps the world safe from the sorrow
We are here, we are there
Interact starts it over and saves tomorrow
We are around you
Let's make something new
As Interact is a style of life
It's gonna give you the light

Some people lose their smiles
The power of love
And then the beauty of life
Is never been in the earth

Some people always wish
For a miracle from god above
How much surviving needs
The strength to carry on

We are here, we are there
Interact keeps giving every sad soul a new life
We are here, we are there
Interact is based on the equality spread worldwide
We are around you
Let's make something new
As Interact is a style of life
It's gonna give you the light

Some hearts are lost into the darkness
Spaces filled with tears and misery
Some hearts are so sick of loneliness
Feels like a way for an eternity

They never shared the laughter and pain
Can’t deny the world is full of mistakes
Hoping they show us one smile someday
Everybody wanna feel this way

We are here, we are there
Interact changes the whole world for the better
We are here, we are there
Interact does what it takes to make people happier
We are around you
Let's make something new
As Interact is a style of life
It's gonna give you the light

Ahmed

hé ahmed mais tu bombarde tellement de poèmes que je pe meme plus présenter une des miens... amam wa7da wa7da...
nan je rigole c vraimen excellent, j'aime le style... continue qui sais peut etre qqn les lira un jour et les chantera...

Amir a écrit:: hé ahmed mais tu bombarde tellement de poèmes que je pe meme plus présenter une des miens... amam wa7da wa7da...
nan je rigole c vraimen excellent, j'aime le style... continue qui sais peut etre qqn les lira un jour et les chantera...

merci ya Amir pr ton support Smile

eh oui, jémeré bien k1 jour, qq1 les interprete ac une bell musicalité... banana

oops....

modification pr la derniere poeme ke g ecrite.. allez voir Smile

c pa remarquable!!! c difficile de les apprendre toutes!!!

hé ta pa en français? ou arabe?

peut etre c pas facile de les apprendre... mé si on ve, on pe biensur...
non je ne suis doué a ecrire ni en arabe ni en francais... :|

hi again les amis(e)s... ben voici ma tte derniere poeme, je lé ecrite 7 matinée pendant les cours, parck ct tres ennuyeu wallbash

j espere kell vs plaira:

Hollow without you

This day is raining
There’s no light in your eyes that can shine on me
My heart is beating
There’s no air I can breathe and I’m blind to see

That every piece of your love was true
It was the treasure in my life to give something new
But now everything is gone away
And I miss every lovely thing I found in you

<<Chorus>>

But time has changed
Has changed for me
Baby, is it the end
Is it an eternal goodbye?
Tell me what to do
I feel hollow without you

My life is drowning
When you don’t listen to what I say, so I feel lonely
Loneliness is calling
Don’t you know the shadow of love is killing me?

I see you every night in my dreams
But the place where you are is out of reach
It’s time for me to realize
The love has faded away with every wish

<<Chorus>>

Nobody can imagine how a vacant space in me
No angel around, no way to survive
Nobody can feel me when I’m screaming aloud
Holding on to the day you’ll make me alive

<<Chorus>>

Ahmed

ya Ahmed , c'est tout simplement superbe cke tu écris. J'adooooooooooooooooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee , c'est honnete ! Tu as une facilité à écrir et a fair passer tes émotions , c'est impressionnant ! Encore bravo !!!!!! ( ca mérite un agadou dou dou...!) Very Happy