Poetry

4you a écrit:: yeahh.... Timi, did u like this one? anyway, if only u give me a chance, i would sing it 2 u below ur balcony

ok, but you must go to slovakia... :lol:
it must be very romantic when someone sing below your balcony. and this person must have many pluck Wink

Timi a écrit:

4you a écrit:: yeahh.... Timi, did u like this one? anyway, if only u give me a chance, i would sing it 2 u below ur balcony

ok, but you must go to slovakia... :lol:
it must be very romantic when someone sing below your balcony. and this person must have many pluck Wink

yeah but this person must have at least a nice voice, if not then he ll wake everybody up in the late of the night... Mr. Green

Kolya a écrit:

4you a écrit:

Kolya a écrit:: I wonder if wrote everything here by yourself?

yeah

this is a good question... personally i ve no proof 4 what i wrote, all i can say is that is written by myself... and i always writ in mathematic's session Wink

Very good! We have an idea to compose a hymn for our Interact club, but nobody can't do it. But I think you can do it for Sfax club.

well i think that i finally made my attempt for a hymn... read it nd tell me how it is:

Interact’s Hymn

Some people are crying
Some people are crying
Calling for a hand
With broken feelings
Waiting for someone else

Some people feel lonely
Cause of lack of affection
They need somebody
To give protection

We are here, we are there
To keep the world safe from the sorrow
We are here, we are there
To start it over and to save tomorrow
We are around you
It’s time to make something new

Some people lose their smiles
The power of love
And then the beauty of life
Is never been in the earth

Some people always wish
For a miracle from god above
How much surviving needs
The strength to carry on

We are here, we are there
Always around to give everybody a new life
We are here, we are there
For the equality to be spread worldwide
We are around you
It’s time to make something new

Some hearts are lost into the darkness
Spaces filled with tears and misery
Some hearts are so sick of loneliness
Feels like a way for an eternity

They never shared the laughter and pain
Can’t deny the world is full of mistakes
Hoping they show us one smile someday
Everybody wanna feel this way

We are here, we are there
To change the whole world for the better
We are here, we are there
To do what it takes to make people happier
We are around you
It’s time to make something new

Ahmed

Hollow without you

This day is raining
There’s no light in your eyes that can shine on me
My heart is beating
There’s no air I can breathe and I’m blind to see

That every piece of your love was true
It was the treasure in my life to give something new
But now everything is gone away
And I miss every lovely thing I found in you

<<Chorus>>

But time has changed
Has changed for me
Baby, is it the end
Is it an eternal goodbye?
Tell me what to do
I feel hollow without you

My life is drowning
When you don’t listen to what I say, so I feel lonely
Loneliness is calling
Don’t you know the shadow of love is killing me?

I see you every night in my dreams
But the place where you are is out of reach
It’s time for me to realize
The love has faded away with every wish

<<Chorus>>

Nobody can imagine how a vacant space in me
No angel around, no way to survive
Nobody can feel me when I’m screaming aloud
Holding on to the day you’ll make me alive

<<Chorus>>

Ahmed

Love

It’s hard to explain what it’s meant to be
It’s strange that you believe in what you see
Life can change with a miraculous look
A breath of love is just to feel good

Hopes are always meant to make you feel
What love can bring you as long as you live
Feelings are so high to love and idolize
That’s wonderful when dreams realize

Love is the only way to know what a person you are
It makes you feel the dearest thing in your heart

All can be revealed thanks to a warm touch
No more confusion that used to be so much
There is no need to fear the loneliness
Cause love gives you strength and happiness

As time goes by you’ll learn that it’s true
Feeling that you’re loved is the best for you
As long as sharing always offers you something better
You’ll know what it means keeping it forever

Love can show you all what appeal to you in this world
Every special moment feels like a heaven in this earth

Everybody needs union in life to carry on
Building up the power of love can make you strong
Enough of living everyday in solitary ways
Give love a chance to save those next days

Who can deny the strong power of a tender kiss
From which a wave of emotions is sent through the lips
You can wipe away your tears from your face
Cause love protects you from hurting fire and flames

Love is briefly the greatest thing for the human being
It just leads you to somewhere in the seventh sky
Love is all you really need for the best living
It just gives you wings to let you fly

<<Ahmed>>

Real Truth

Baby there is something I can’t understand
That makes me fear the end
Seems like a precious thing has disappeared eternally
When I look into your eyes deeply

Why am I supposed to feel the pain
A hurting way just insane
What should I believe in when you’re by my side
Without sharing the loving time

That line makes me wonder
Where it goes the laughter
Where are those romantic moments we shared together

<<Chorus>>
Time is running out
And I can’t still see
How some better times
Could be back to me
If you don’t feel the same
Let me know it as well
Fill my heart with sadness
Just to push me to yell
If I could I would
Get the real truth

You used to tell me very touching words
Used to sing me like a bird
Have your feelings fallen down for real overnight
When I was holding you tight

Now I’m torn between what I’m feeling
And what it’s just aching
Confusion overwhelms my heart that it’s just true
So let’s make things through

Obscurity is hard to overcome
When lies are right here as one
Is there any way for us to see again the ray of the sun

<<Chorus>>

If I could I would
Feel your heart again
And read what’s hidden
Inside of you
If I could I would
Get the real truth

<<Ahmed>>

its very nice poem, i like it. Very Happy

you should give all your poems to someone who ll make a music . i know you can sing, so you should sing them and i think it ll be very popular. lol!

In the arms of a hero

It was a dark night when she’s been alone
When there were no sharing with another soul
She run a single life
With a missing light
Waiting for a hero

It was a lonely place in which she felt rejected
A big space in which she was out of feeling protected
She became hopeless
No sign of happiness
‘til a coming of a hero

Pre-chorus

A hero has been finally sent from above so she’ll never let him go
Cause his appearance is just miraculous enough for her to know

Chorus

What you can find in the arms of a hero
Is some pieces of love and a beautiful sensation
What you can feel in the arms of a hero
Is a powerful strength in every kind of situation
Goodbye to the loneliness
Welcome to the togetherness
In the arms of a hero
You can show up to the real beauty of life

It was hard for her to express her burning flame
As she was imprisoned by a never ending despair
Freedom was out of reach
Love was just a dream
All is in the arms of a hero

It was a solid wall that hampers her to see clearly
All the chances to build up a magnificent love story
Standing for this forever
Couldn’t make her happier
‘til a coming of a hero

Pre-chorus

Chorus

A hero has been finally sent from above so she’ll never let him go
Cause his appearance is just miraculous enough for her to know
That nobody wants to be alone
Nobody wants to be out the door
Love is what everybody’s asking for

Chorus

Ahmed

amenie a écrit:

thank u very much for ur support... I really need someone like u to carry on writing poems Very Happy

and here again my latest one:

Surrender to your heart

Another day and you’re crying on your own
Some people pass by you and wonder why
You chose between being happy and sad
Ignoring the love you had and can’t deny

Another night and you’re drowning in your deepest thoughts
Trying to pull the right from the wrong
You can’t understand what’s shaking in your heart
Losing the way you used to be so strong

Mystery is creeping up from inside
The end has reached its final line
And this is what I’m afraid of
Oh my love…

<<Chorus>>

Just surrender to your heart
Let’s not feel ourselves apart
The ray of love is almost here
That’s enough to make you near
Just surrender to my words
They’ll bring you to my world
We used to be all the time together
So we’d better make it last forever
If only you surrender to your heart

You bring the pain and the flame to yourself
I always feel all this every time I stare at you
You are not this person that you used to be
The agony’s caught you but I’m still true

Now beliefs in me are just gonna disappear day after day
It will take a long time to make hopes reach my life
Night and day and I’m trying to stay next to you baby
But I feel there are no more emotions by your side

You’re trying to find the truth
But the real truth is in you
If only you open up your eyes
Oh my love…

<<Chorus>>

Believe in what I say
Believe in what I do
Enough of believing in unreal illusions
Baby let us find a way
Make me back to you
Love will put at end to this confusion

<<Chorus>>

Ahmed

amazing.

hi

i dont know why, but i took the pen and paper and started to write. its my firtst poetry in english, i know there are some mistakes, hehe, but i tried Smile

Angels in disguise

Now I know more
Than I used to know before
Because I grow

Some people seem so nice
But they are not
They will keep telling you lies
Pretend they care, but they don’t

They will promise to do anything for you
Even move house, whatever
Love you for the rest of their life
But they won’t

You can’t be never sure
What to expect
Even your best friend can put a knife
To your back
Angels in disguise all around you
Smiling to your face
Don’t forget you have yourself to trust
And way to trust someone else

Embarassed

hi, Timi
The poetry is very good for the first time.

But I think it is too pessimistic. You should be more optimistic Very Happy

thank you

i know, its pessimistic, i must confess that now i wonder why i wrote precisely this.. maybe because of memories and what happened recently... anyway its away Smile

congratulations for the first poem... 10/10

anyway, maybe this angel u r talkin about was bad but know that everything that happen, happen for a reason... who knows....?

4you a écrit:: congratulations for the first poem...
anyway, maybe this angel u r talkin about was bad but know that everything that happen, happen for a reason... who knows....?

oh, thanx. i know that, its my motto...heh, if i ll know this reason, i ll be veeeeery happy

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here is another one... hehe, it was written during german lessons.. Mr. Green

but now i cant write on these lessons, because my proffesor was always disturbing and castigating me Embarassed

heh,now i ll do it during math or physics party

We've got...

We've got to be friends
Now we forget the story
Don't break this chance
You've got to say I'm sorry
Got to be friends and no more toss about it
Let's shake our hands, all will be fine
You've got to know what I feel to you
I got to know what you feel to me
If you wanna dance together with a friend
Let's do it
We've got to be brother and sister
I miss you
This place in my life is all empty
Just say sorry and come back to me
I got to say to you again
That everybody needs a friend
I want you to come back into my life
It's enough to do any apology
We've got to be friends shaking our hands
I wanna I can
We've got to be friends, you and I guess
Don't be afraid, so come on
We've got to be friends in bad or good
I wanna be with you, so understand
Please come back to me
Or give me back piece of my heart
Rolling Eyes

hooooooo , veryyyyyyyy goooooood , Timi Mr. Green

T@KiLa a écrit:: hooooooo , veryyyyyyyy goooooood , Timi

i m really happy, if you liked it. thanx banana